Resume Phrases Question:

Here are two examples for resume objectives paragraphs:
☛ As a fully qualified headteacher with 15 years of varied experience, there is much I can offer to the education of our young children. I have more than 10 years of experience in mentoring and coaching teaching staff in ABC school. I am confident that my passion for the teacher's and children's development, together with my skills and experience will enable me to make a significant difference at your school.
☛ I am a PhD business management professional with more than 16 years of experience. I possess multiple skills covering many fields including business development, organization management and marketing enhancement. I have been a managing director where I led a marketing division of 2000 marketing engineers across 3 countries. I have a long list of corporate achievements that I would be pleased to present.