IELTS Writing Test Question:

The answer is well written and contains some good arguments. It does tend to repeat these arguments but the writer's point of view remains clear throughout. The message is easy to fol ow and ideasare arranged well with good use of cohesivedevices. Thereare minor problemswith coherence andat times the expression is clumsy and imprecise.There is a wide range of structures thatare well handled with only small problemsinthe use of vocabulary,mainlyinthe areasofspelling andword choice.