IELTS Writing Test Question:

The candidate has made a good at empt to describe the graphs looking at global trends and more detailed figures. There is, however, some information missing and the information is inaccurate in minor areas.The answer flows quite smoothly although connectives are over used or inappropriate, and some of the points do not link up well. The grammatical accuracy is quite goodandthelanguageusedtodescribethe trendsiswell handled. However,thereare problems with expressionand the appropriate choice ofwordsandwhilstthereis good structuralcontrol,thecomplexity and variation in the sentences are limited.