IELTS Writing Test Question:

The answer dealswellwith both the individualmedia trendsandthe overall comparisonofthese trends.The opening couldbe morefully developed with the inclusionof informationrelating to the groups studiedand the periodof time during which the study tookplace. There is a good variety of cohesive devices and the message can be followed quite easily although the expression is sometimes a little clumsy.Structures are complex and vocabulary is varied but there are errors in word forms, tense and voice thought he sedo not impede communication.